You've just landed

Hi again. Niko here.

This week’s prompt

You just landed in Japan for your trip. Your friend is waiting for you when you finally get through immigration and customs.

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Last week’s corrections

You just bought plane tickets to Japan. You’re going there next month! You text your friend who lives there to let them know.

Some secret inspiration behind this prompt: I’m going to Japan next month to visit family, and I’m sending messages to everyone there I want to meet up with. ^_^

Anyway, here’s what I originally wrote for this prompt:

来月日本行くよ～！遊ぼうね
らいげつ　にほん　いく　よ～！　あそぼう　ね
I'm going to Japan next month! Let’s hang out.
Lit. next month + Japan + go + よ～! + let’s play + ね

I asked Rei what she though of this answer, and she said it seemed fine, but she thought it sounded a bit girly.

If I wanted to sound more masculine (but still excited), I could have put something like: